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A fan comic created by Laura - Zavraan named: Aquantis.
This story takes place in the universe of Ecco the dolphin, defender of the future. 200 years after his death, the dolphins of the future have created a paradise city around the island called: Aquantis. But a dolphin named Tydea will discover more about his seemingly 'perfect' city.
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Dumb title. Also, I changed her black tattoos since it's too hard to draw and it looked mary-sue-ish.
But...I've been walking with an idea for a while now. What if....Laya, was a video game character? I already have the story in mind. And before you're going to acuse me for making this look like a rip off from Spyro ANB, then NO.
The story consists out of two parts. One which is the begining and the other is the ending. So, her entire story will be told in two seperate games.
Anyway, let's tell the idea of the story.
Laya is a confident, strong and talented fire dragon who lives among a fire dragon clan. She sees herself as the alpha and uses her strong leadership and strength to guide them. She does have compatition with other dragons since they think she's too selfish. But Laya's deeds are all good intended. But one day, they meet a fire dragon who threatens to kill the clan. Laya fights the enraged dragon but spares his life when suddenly he begs for mercy. He tells everyone that he's been possesed by the dark spells made by the dark spirit named Yang.
He also tells her a stroy that will change her life forever. Their world is filled with a lot of mistical creatures, but very few dragons. The most rare among them are the black and white ones. The black and white ones are born every milania. But their closest relative is the violet colored ragon who can become very old and very wise. every elemental dragon who's the strongest protects a different part of their world, watching their land in an area surrounded by their element. A wind dragon lives in the mountains. An ice dragon lives in the norht and so on.
But he tells her something more spiritual. Many wise violet dragons have claimed that every element the dragons dominate, it has a yin and yang spirit. Even a destructive power like fire or lightning has a good side. The spirits are portrait in animal creatures. For example, the yin version of the element fire, is a phoenix and the yang version is a dragon. And that, is Laya. She was stumped to hear that she symbolices the dark side of fire. But if Laya is origonaly a spirit, then why is she in the mortal world? The fire dragon explained that not long ago, a few planets in the unniverse lined up creating a few minutes to break the bond of the spirits. A violet dragon wanted to use a special spell in order to speak to the spirits, but a dark glimpse of magic shot through the energy, making the dragon from the fire element fall down to earth, seperated from the circle. The only way the dragon could be saved, was to bring her into the mortal world and discover her fire powers in order to bring balance for fire.
But that's not all....the small mistake had also made it possible for the Yin and Yang dragons to escape the circle and become mortal to planet earth. They don't have an animal form but....( I'll save that for the next part hehe~ )
Now, the Yang dragon is trying to take over the minds of all elemental dragons around the globe. Spreading chaos everywhere. Now, it is Laya's job to venture around the globe and nautrulize all the dragons and bring peace back. Even thought she is the symbol of the dark side from fire, every Yang has a Yin and decides to proove her worth. On the way, she will nautrulize the earth, ice, wind and lightning.
SEQUAL AND LAST PART
The second one is ofcourse the last one. So...how does it start? We begin with Laya who is again, showing off using her fire powers when she suddenly hears a voice in her head, telling her to go in a cave and touch a special crystal. Laya has recently been improving her skills with another fire dragon mentor. ( she;'s not at home anymore, she's at the other side of the world. ) She tells about the mysterious voice and he tells her that it may be the yin spirit of fire. They both venture towards the cave where they see a wall gulved in purple crystals. Laya then touches them and begins to glow hot white. Thefire like sparkles begin to form and create a figure behind Laya. In the end, the figure becomes clear and it appears to be a phoenix named Gynaro. He explains that there is not much time left before the Yang spirit unleashes its full power upon the unniverse. He also explains that the physical and psychological world are heavily connected to each other and that's why he managed to convert himself into the mortal world.
But he has also taken a very big risk. Now, the balance of fire depends on this due who no longer exists in the spirit world. Without further ado, they venture off towards the open ocean in order to nautrulize the ocean dragon named: Seleana. After that, Seleana tells them to search for the undergound caves and the wise violet dragon who can help them. During their adventure, the duo builds up a friendship as they've teamed up. Laya, controlls the bad side of fire so she will destroy and controll the evil sources of fire and Gynaro will controll the good source of fire. When they arrive in the cave, it's filled with all sorts of crystals and meet the old wise violet dragon who also appears to be the ones causing this whole catastrophy. But he assures that it wasn't his intention to cause this mistake. Explaining to them that the yang spirit was using its power to escape frm the circle and use this oppertunity to transfer in the mortal world. He and Yn choose to transform into dragons since it's the most powerfull being on planet earth. The violet dragon has a name, don't worry. Saigus tells them to both bring a white crystal with them as they fly beyond the horizon. ( beyod the atmosphere ) the crystal gives more acces to their spiritual power in order to survive on the edge of space.
The sky begins to look black with white lightning and a bit of dark purple as they encounter a dark floating castle. For the first time, they encounter the dark spirit Yang. He's completely black with only white eys and a whit spot on his head. While he begins a bit of smack talking, he takes controll over Laya. Telling Gynaro that the Yang spirit controlls her infinite anger and dark side. But then, the Yin spirit arrives, telling Gynaro to fight Laya in order to bring her back. Laya snaps out of the spell and together, they team up with the Yin spirit. The battle becomes epic when it looks like that the world becomes to create its own chaotic end. Luckily the two manage to nautrulize the Yang spirit and put the two back together with the help of the spirit crystals. However, as they change back to their origonal form and create a gian yin yang cirlce that spins around infront of the two, the chaos is still raging on earth. Lava and fire seem to dominate the world. Laya doesn';t understand but gets a shocking and sad confession from Gynaro in order to bring back balance. The only way...is to die. And transfert back to the spirit world. However, Laya has been so attached to to earth and mortal life, that saying goodbye was harder than ever. Before they sacreficed themselves, Laya took off her necklace given by her parents and let it fall down to earth. A bright light shines and disapears after their death. The fire became calm and the earth heald. Everything was in peace. Laya's fire mentor in the begining of the story, finds the necklace and brings it to the shrine where all the symbolic animal spirits of the elements were painted on a wall filled with crystals.
THE END.
So there...NOTHING like Spyro. I'm too tired to point out why it's different, so I will point it out later.
Enjoy~
But...I've been walking with an idea for a while now. What if....Laya, was a video game character? I already have the story in mind. And before you're going to acuse me for making this look like a rip off from Spyro ANB, then NO.
The story consists out of two parts. One which is the begining and the other is the ending. So, her entire story will be told in two seperate games.
Anyway, let's tell the idea of the story.
Laya is a confident, strong and talented fire dragon who lives among a fire dragon clan. She sees herself as the alpha and uses her strong leadership and strength to guide them. She does have compatition with other dragons since they think she's too selfish. But Laya's deeds are all good intended. But one day, they meet a fire dragon who threatens to kill the clan. Laya fights the enraged dragon but spares his life when suddenly he begs for mercy. He tells everyone that he's been possesed by the dark spells made by the dark spirit named Yang.
He also tells her a stroy that will change her life forever. Their world is filled with a lot of mistical creatures, but very few dragons. The most rare among them are the black and white ones. The black and white ones are born every milania. But their closest relative is the violet colored ragon who can become very old and very wise. every elemental dragon who's the strongest protects a different part of their world, watching their land in an area surrounded by their element. A wind dragon lives in the mountains. An ice dragon lives in the norht and so on.
But he tells her something more spiritual. Many wise violet dragons have claimed that every element the dragons dominate, it has a yin and yang spirit. Even a destructive power like fire or lightning has a good side. The spirits are portrait in animal creatures. For example, the yin version of the element fire, is a phoenix and the yang version is a dragon. And that, is Laya. She was stumped to hear that she symbolices the dark side of fire. But if Laya is origonaly a spirit, then why is she in the mortal world? The fire dragon explained that not long ago, a few planets in the unniverse lined up creating a few minutes to break the bond of the spirits. A violet dragon wanted to use a special spell in order to speak to the spirits, but a dark glimpse of magic shot through the energy, making the dragon from the fire element fall down to earth, seperated from the circle. The only way the dragon could be saved, was to bring her into the mortal world and discover her fire powers in order to bring balance for fire.
But that's not all....the small mistake had also made it possible for the Yin and Yang dragons to escape the circle and become mortal to planet earth. They don't have an animal form but....( I'll save that for the next part hehe~ )
Now, the Yang dragon is trying to take over the minds of all elemental dragons around the globe. Spreading chaos everywhere. Now, it is Laya's job to venture around the globe and nautrulize all the dragons and bring peace back. Even thought she is the symbol of the dark side from fire, every Yang has a Yin and decides to proove her worth. On the way, she will nautrulize the earth, ice, wind and lightning.
SEQUAL AND LAST PART
The second one is ofcourse the last one. So...how does it start? We begin with Laya who is again, showing off using her fire powers when she suddenly hears a voice in her head, telling her to go in a cave and touch a special crystal. Laya has recently been improving her skills with another fire dragon mentor. ( she;'s not at home anymore, she's at the other side of the world. ) She tells about the mysterious voice and he tells her that it may be the yin spirit of fire. They both venture towards the cave where they see a wall gulved in purple crystals. Laya then touches them and begins to glow hot white. Thefire like sparkles begin to form and create a figure behind Laya. In the end, the figure becomes clear and it appears to be a phoenix named Gynaro. He explains that there is not much time left before the Yang spirit unleashes its full power upon the unniverse. He also explains that the physical and psychological world are heavily connected to each other and that's why he managed to convert himself into the mortal world.
But he has also taken a very big risk. Now, the balance of fire depends on this due who no longer exists in the spirit world. Without further ado, they venture off towards the open ocean in order to nautrulize the ocean dragon named: Seleana. After that, Seleana tells them to search for the undergound caves and the wise violet dragon who can help them. During their adventure, the duo builds up a friendship as they've teamed up. Laya, controlls the bad side of fire so she will destroy and controll the evil sources of fire and Gynaro will controll the good source of fire. When they arrive in the cave, it's filled with all sorts of crystals and meet the old wise violet dragon who also appears to be the ones causing this whole catastrophy. But he assures that it wasn't his intention to cause this mistake. Explaining to them that the yang spirit was using its power to escape frm the circle and use this oppertunity to transfer in the mortal world. He and Yn choose to transform into dragons since it's the most powerfull being on planet earth. The violet dragon has a name, don't worry. Saigus tells them to both bring a white crystal with them as they fly beyond the horizon. ( beyod the atmosphere ) the crystal gives more acces to their spiritual power in order to survive on the edge of space.
The sky begins to look black with white lightning and a bit of dark purple as they encounter a dark floating castle. For the first time, they encounter the dark spirit Yang. He's completely black with only white eys and a whit spot on his head. While he begins a bit of smack talking, he takes controll over Laya. Telling Gynaro that the Yang spirit controlls her infinite anger and dark side. But then, the Yin spirit arrives, telling Gynaro to fight Laya in order to bring her back. Laya snaps out of the spell and together, they team up with the Yin spirit. The battle becomes epic when it looks like that the world becomes to create its own chaotic end. Luckily the two manage to nautrulize the Yang spirit and put the two back together with the help of the spirit crystals. However, as they change back to their origonal form and create a gian yin yang cirlce that spins around infront of the two, the chaos is still raging on earth. Lava and fire seem to dominate the world. Laya doesn';t understand but gets a shocking and sad confession from Gynaro in order to bring back balance. The only way...is to die. And transfert back to the spirit world. However, Laya has been so attached to to earth and mortal life, that saying goodbye was harder than ever. Before they sacreficed themselves, Laya took off her necklace given by her parents and let it fall down to earth. A bright light shines and disapears after their death. The fire became calm and the earth heald. Everything was in peace. Laya's fire mentor in the begining of the story, finds the necklace and brings it to the shrine where all the symbolic animal spirits of the elements were painted on a wall filled with crystals.
THE END.
So there...NOTHING like Spyro. I'm too tired to point out why it's different, so I will point it out later.
Enjoy~
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A fine storyline, I'd certainly play it. ^^ I sorta know Spyro, and yes this is different. However, also similar in some ways... But you can't be completely opposite, of course.
I always love a story with self-sacrifice involved, I guess because I find it touching and as heroic as heroic can be.
Laya reminds me of a character of my own in her way, too... I'm actually writing that character's story. One of my stories is still a draft and has 19-20 chapters, but the story of this character was only started just recently. However, I intend it to have plenty of chapters none the less. Maybe you'd let me tell you about the plot one day?
Also, if you like games with dragons, I MIGHT suggest the game LAIR for the PS3... Not sure whether you'll like it or not, but the main character is a dragon rider. But because he rides a dragon, your technically just navigating the dragon itself.
I always love a story with self-sacrifice involved, I guess because I find it touching and as heroic as heroic can be.
Laya reminds me of a character of my own in her way, too... I'm actually writing that character's story. One of my stories is still a draft and has 19-20 chapters, but the story of this character was only started just recently. However, I intend it to have plenty of chapters none the less. Maybe you'd let me tell you about the plot one day?
Also, if you like games with dragons, I MIGHT suggest the game LAIR for the PS3... Not sure whether you'll like it or not, but the main character is a dragon rider. But because he rides a dragon, your technically just navigating the dragon itself.