Meladon

And it's time for mister badass Meladon and Ryle. XD

Yeah, Ryle isn't in this picture but that doesn't stop me from showing his background.

Also, i decided to change Melalond and Ryle's relationship a bit. They will no longer be father and son, they will be friends from now on. Anywayyyy, let's begin:



Meladon is a confident, strong and fierce dark alicorn who is proud of his abilities. But he only shows satishfaction when things go well. He is capable of increasing his speed, a lazer like beam from his horn, a fiery red shield and unbelievible strength. However, these powers were not gained fairly. Meladon along with his friend Ryle are gaining dark powers from a dark pit located near a dark rocky landscape hidden between the snowy mountains. They've figured out a spell in which they can equipt themselves with dark powers and wings. The horn gives them the ability to hold their strength and the wings allow them to fly. ( duh ) however, this power does not last forever. The red tattoos will slowly fade away if their power is done. So they need to return towards the pit every now and then in order to keep these powers. Even though Meladon acts like a twisted genius when in battle, he always thinks his plan through before his attack. Most of the time he is very calm and thoughtfull. But acts like a sadistic devil when things go perfectly as planned. He loves to tease others with his great inteligence and enjoys driving them crazy.

Ryle is not much different from his friend, besides the fact that he is more silent in battle. Ryle loves to tease others as well and see his opponents in pain. It also serves as the anwser to their 'power gaining' porblem. Everytime their opponent suffers great pain, the temptation of their sadistic nature allows the tattoos to last longer; thus being able to gain more power and abilities. Ryle knows a lot of combat skills and is a master at surprising his enemies. He tends to act like a badass when things go well. When things don't go his way however, he has trouble staying calm since he looks for an opening to attack. Ryle doesn't get enraged as fast as Meladon, but he does have a hot temper when tested. Ryle and Meladon don't fight alone. Thanks to the dark pit and Meladon's high inteligence, he summons hell like creatures in order to support the battle. They treat these creatures as minions and when they fail to please, they're send right back into the pit.



Same question from last time: Did I improve?

Do Meladon and Ryle stand out? Are they different enough from the others? If so, please critique.