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It's a good story, you just need to be a bit careful with your spelling and such. I mean, I get that English is tough. Hell, it's even tough for people who've been speaking/writing it their entire lives XD
If you would like to improve on what I mentioned, you could check words you're not sure of in an English dictionary, Google whatever you're not sure of, or have someone beta read your chapters before you post them to catch any mistakes.
But other than that, the story seems to be coming along nicely Looking forward to the next chapter~
If you would like to improve on what I mentioned, you could check words you're not sure of in an English dictionary, Google whatever you're not sure of, or have someone beta read your chapters before you post them to catch any mistakes.
But other than that, the story seems to be coming along nicely Looking forward to the next chapter~